When I first sent my manuscript to a freelance editor, she said: "This novel has no emotion. You need to take Margie Lawson's class."   So I took your class, right?  Then, this week I just got it back again from a different freelance editor and the first thing she said was, "I'm glad to see a lot of emotion in this story. That's one thing that I get the most frustrated with in the many pieces I've critiqued.
 

Sandi