This class is about openings. All your openings, not just the first opening in your book.

The opening of your first chapter needs to carry powerful content, and powerful structure and style.

The opening of every scene and every chapter needs to hook the reader with content and structure and style too.

Want to add a psychological punch to your writing and editing?

Want to learn how to capture the full range of body language on the page?

Want to turn your work into a page-turner by powering up emotion and hooking the reader viscerally?

DEEP EDITING is for the writer who wants to psychologically impact the unconscious of the reader. For the writer who wants to learn fresh editing techniques. For the writer who wants to edit for power.

Need to learn how to gain control of your writing life? Learn how to defeat your self-defeating behaviors. Challenge your thinking. Use more than the usual 12 % of your brain. Set yourself up to perform at your peak by analyzing what patterns get in your way and tweaking those patterns to make them work for you.

• Know WHAT editing you need to do WHERE
• WHY you need to edit that passage
• HOW – using multiple options that fit you and your writing style to create page turners

Learn how to analyze and use body language to your advantage in real life.  Learn how to monitor and modulate your body language and nuances of speech to send the right messages.
Appear confident.  Poised.  Professional.

This class is all about adding emotion to your scenes.

If you have a scene that carries a strong emotional stimulus, you usually need to give your POV character a visceral response.

I'll teach you exactly what you need to know to make your writing carry emotion that will hook your reader.  You'll learn tips and techniques and cool ways to make your writing soar.

Learn how to write body language and dialogue cues from a kinesics specialist.