Margie Lawson

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Developmental Editing with Rhay Christou


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The forest of your story is as important as the individual trees, but sometimes we get so focused on a line, a word, a sentence, we don’t take the time to see the overall picture we’re creating.

With developmental editing, we focus on the forest -- the overall development of plot on both the scene level and whole level, the characters that populate your pages, and if they truly grow and change, as well as forward motion, cause and effect, story development from beginning to end of pages submitted. Whether a partial or a full manuscript, writers will received detailed information regarding the development of character, setting, plot, goals, motivation, conflict and character growth.  Each response includes a detailed developmental editing letter focusing on what is working, areas that the writer might want to delve deeper, as well as specific notes in scene/chapter wrap ups, inline comments.

Price:   $5.50 /250 word page - sold in sets of 10 pages.


Rhay Christou

Rhay Christou loves her dogs—Fredo and MoJoe—her teaching and writing. Making her home in a small village in Cyprus, when she is not wandering the National Park's trails, she uses her MFA in writing from Vermont College to share her knowledge and experience to cheerlead writers in creating their best stories. Since graduating, she has taught everything from creative writing to academic writing at the university level and writing workshops on the lovely island of Cyprus, in Greece and the USA.



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