Expanding time is a brilliant tool that most writers don’t empower as much as they could. An expanded time passage that’s written well locks the reader in the POV character’s emotions. Writers can use those strong emotions to keep the reader immersed in the story from one high emotion scene to the next.

In this 90-minute webinar, you’ll learn:

1. Three smart tips for how to kick off your expanded time passages
2. What scene elements to include
3. How to be strategic with style and structure
4. Ticking Clock Style
5. Accordion Style
6. Big Bang Style
7. Deep editing goodies to make them super-empowered strong

Expect something different in this webinar—and after.

We’ll dig deep and analyze expanded time passages from different genres, comparing the got-it-on-the-page Befores to the Deep Edited Afters. You’ll learn how these authors made their expand time passages carry big-time emotion.

Learning what elements to include and deep edit analyzing helps you learn how to expand time and add power. But wouldn’t it be great to have Margie’s help with your expanded time passages?

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Rated 5 out of 5

August 10, 2022

This webinar shares a unique aspect of writing craft--the ability to expand time within a scene. It's a technique that probably isn't used enough and here Margie shares fantastic examples and strategies how to apply this amazing craft tool. An in-depth discussion of a fabulous writing craft topic you likely will not find anywhere else.

Suzanne Purvis

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