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Nix a Fine Word or Phrase and Dig Deep to Add Emotion


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Nix a Fine Word or Phrase and Dig Deep to Add Emotion

So... I took this idea and not only ran with it, I ran it around the world!

I was doing some editing sessions with Laura Drake, one-on-one zoom-style sessions that were follow ups to an in-person Immersion class. We were deep editing the first chapter of her WIP -- and we were having so much fun adding lots of power, that I asked Laura if I could use it in my webinar. She was thrilled!

Sometimes writers can change one word or add a phrase and add big-time power. That word or phrase works. It’s fine.

But who wants to write a book that is fine? Nice? Acceptable?

You want your book to grab your reader’s emotions and grip them hard.

And that's what Laura Drake writes. Stories that readers can't forget. Stories that stay in their mind and heart forever.

The Immersion Master Class and our follow up editing sessions shifted Laura's brain back into the deep editing mode she learned and honed in her four Immersion classes. Her fresh writing will WOW you!

Attend this 90-minute webinar and learn how to change a word or phrase and:

-- Add emotional impact.

-- Enrich characterization.

-- Use theming to go deeper.

-- Amplify dialogue and thoughts.

-- Put the POV character’s emotions on the page.

Don’t miss little opportunities that would make your scenes stronger!

I’ll share examples of Befores and Afters as well as teaching points. If you like, you could print a chapter or two. And at the end of the webinar you could look for places where you could add emotional power to your WIP.

Catch one of the webinars listed below --or watch the recording whenever.

Hope to see you!

Thursday, March 28, 12:00 – 1:30 p.m. Mountain Time

Friday, March 29, 7:00 – 8:30 p.m. Mountain Time


Can't make the live webinar? Purchase a recording! Recordings will be available the Monday after the webinar finishes. You'll find the link to the recording and handouts in your account under downloads.

Watch the recording whenever you like!



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