Triple Pass Deep Edit:
This may be the psychologically-based critique you need. I cover everything I teach, including:
- strengthening nuanced emotion and visceral emotion
- writing fresh
- empowering cadence
- using rhetorical devices where it counts
- picking up pace
- using the full range of body language and dialogue cues
- making it all flow.
Everything I teach is trumped by flow. No speedbumps.
Deep Editing empowers writing to create an emotionally-gripping page-turner. My detailed deep edit comments explain why and how. I want my deep edit critique to teach you how to deep edit for psychological power.
I also share KUDOS. 🙂
If you’re a multi-Margie grad (minimum, Empowering Characters’ Emotions and Deep Editing), feel free to contact me for the specifics. Thanks!