Margie Lawson

Triple Pass Deep Edit:

This may be the psychologically-based critique you need.  I cover everything I teach, including:

• • strengthening nuanced emotion and visceral emotion

• • writing fresh

• • empowering cadence

• • using rhetorical devices where it counts

• • picking up pace

• • using the full range of body language and dialogue cues

• making it all flow.

Everything I teach is trumped by flow. No speedbumps.

Deep Editing empowers writing to create an emotionally-gripping page-turner. My detailed deep edit comments explain why and how. I want my deep edit critique to teach you how to deep edit for psychological power.

I also share KUDOS. 🙂

If you're a multi-Margie grad (minimum, Empowering Characters' Emotions and Deep Editing), feel free to contact me for the specifics. Thanks!