Triple Pass Deep Edit Critiques and Power-ON Coaching

Triple Pass Deep Edit:

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This may be the psychologically-based critique you need.  I cover everything I teach, including:

-- strengthening nuanced emotion and visceral emotion

-- writing fresh

-- empowering cadence

-- using rhetorical devices where it counts

-- picking up pace

--using the full range of body language and dialogue cues

--making it all flow.

Everything I teach is trumped by flow. No speedbumps.

Deep Editing empowers writing to create an emotionally-gripping page-turner. My detailed deep edit comments explain why and how. I want my deep edit critique to teach you how to deep edit for psychological power.

I also share KUDOS. :-)

If you're a multi-Margie grad (minimum, Empowering Characters' Emotions and Deep Editing), feel free to contact me for the specifics. Thanks!


Margie's Power-ON Coaching

Two Coaching Choices:

1. Power-ON Coaching: Taking Charge of Your Writing Life

Coaching focused on your writing life, by Phone or Skype.

2. Power-ON Coaching: Deep Editing Tutorial with Margie

Coaching focused on adding psychological power to your writing. E-mail Margie your chapter(s). She'll deep edit them, e-mail them back to you, and review her feedback by phone or Skype.

If you'd like more specifics, contact me. Thank you.

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