Triple Pass Deep Edit Critiques and Power-ON Coaching
Triple Pass Deep Edit:
This may be the psychologically-based critique you need. I cover everything I teach, including:
-- strengthening nuanced emotion and visceral emotion
-- writing fresh
-- empowering cadence
-- using rhetorical devices where it counts
-- picking up pace
--using the full range of body language and dialogue cues
--making it all flow.
Everything I teach is trumped by flow. No speedbumps.
Deep Editing empowers writing to create an emotionally-gripping page-turner. My detailed deep edit comments explain why and how. I want my deep edit critique to teach you how to deep edit for psychological power.
I also share KUDOS. :-)
If you're a multi-Margie grad (minimum, Empowering Characters' Emotions and Deep Editing), feel free to contact me for the specifics. Thanks!
Margie's Power-ON Coaching
1. Power-ON Coaching: Taking Charge of Your Writing Life
Coaching focused on your writing life, by Phone or Skype.
2. Power-ON Coaching: Deep Editing Tutorial with Margie
Coaching focused on adding psychological power to your writing. E-mail Margie your chapter(s). She'll deep edit them, e-mail them back to you, and review her feedback by phone or Skype.
If you'd like more specifics, contact me. Thank you.